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I initially suggested the idea of a retired adventurer slaying monsters in kids’ bedrooms to a d100 list on Reddit. Recently, I started to think further about the idea and decided to develop it into a novel that I intend to write when I finish my current writing project.
You might have to explain better where the PTSD comes from, but it’s okay since we see who the protagonist is, what he does, the threat and his target. I would make it shorter.
The idea is that the PTSD comes from seeing his friends in the adventuring party die, so it is the same reason he has survivor’s guilt. I guess it’s not as apparent as I thought it was. Thank you for your input.
Sounds like an interesting concept. Good stuff
Perhaps the two sentences could be shortened and still accomplish the goal. For example:
After becoming the sole survivor of his adventuring party, a barbarian with PTSD must save the town’s orphans by slaying the monsters under their beds.
I assumed the children were orphans. I hope to see the final script!
Most of the kids have parents. However, two of them would become orphans early on because the monsters kill their parents. Just so those two end up helping the Barbarian.
Also, I intend to write it primarily as a novel. Maybe adapt it into a screenplay or limited series at some later stage.