Singularity
Posted: 2016-05-14T14:15:21+10:00 In:

After her arranged husband separates her from her piano, a mute pianist must earn her piano back one key at a time by giving lessons to the man who bought it and who secretly loves her.

The Piano

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    1. Singularity

      Logline for The Piano.

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    2. Singularity

      My take:

      When her new husband trades away her beloved piano for land, a mute pianist must earn it back one key at a time by giving lessons to the new owner who secretly loves her.
      (34) words

      I inserted “beloved” to highlight the intensity of her emotional attachment to the piano, ?her desperate need to get it back.

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    3. Singularity

      Yes good point.

      The piano is her only connection to the world in the beginning so it does need to be emphasised in the logline.

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    4. Penpusher

      Nice logline. Could you review mine it should be the newest one. Im working on the script for mine

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