Penpusher
Posted: 2021-01-27T10:49:53+10:00 In:

After losing his military post and falling into a terrifying curse, an ex-soldier travels to the place where he will find his deliverance and the way to the lost city of Elyon, which will save the people of the world of Dunya.

Pilgrims of Elyon: Call to Redemption

This film would be the first part of a trilogy that follows the protagonists’ journey to the lost city of Elyon, encountering obstacles and difficulties along the way, but also their identity and purpose.

A retelling based on the book The Pilgrim’s Progress (John Bunyan), with new characters, a broader, more realistic, and tangible story, but without leaving behind the essence and heart that made the book become the most read after the Bible in its day.

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    1. Samurai

      1. Since Elyon and Dunya are unfamiliar fantasy realms – a world setup may help e.g. In a world ruled by…
      2. Appears the curse is your inciting incident; it may help to state what kind of curse this vet needs to break.
      3. You need a baddie, someone/thing preventing him from achieving the goal.
      4. Once he achieves deliverance, why HIM to save the world?

      Example of what I can see:
      “A cursed veteran sets out on a journey to a mystical lost city for deliverance, but…”

      Keep going, take care.

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