After the eccentric field reporter she’s been ordered to keep sober falls off the wagon, a camera shy PA must over come her case of Tourettes in order to bring back a huge story or lose her job.
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After the eccentric field reporter she’s been ordered to keep sober falls off the wagon, a camera shy PA must over come her case of Tourettes in order to bring back a huge story or lose her job.
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How will she go about bringing back the story? I think you mean she steps in front of the camera her self, right? If so, specify it.
Otherwise, this seems rather lean on plot. She picks up the mic and delivers the news report – end of story. This feels more like one scene in the first act of a feature. Is this a short film?
Last note, the stakes are pretty low, is her job all she cares about in this story?
I?d find it hilarious to watch, especially, if it takes her a while. Not sure how many slip ups she can get away with. Also curious how she?ll go about overcoming her Tourrettes. Is there another interesting part of the story there? Worth loglining?
I think it states everything one needs to know about the story. it shows there will be a mess to deal with and a challenged protagonist who needs to clean everything up, even when they’re own life could be quite messy (based on her personal challenges). I would guess the dream job set up needs to happen pretty fast and its’ somehow related to their disease and how it brings them ease and then this situation pulls them into life more and in ways previously not thought possible. A feel good film. 🙂