Penpusher
Posted: 2021-06-12T22:05:34+10:00 In:

After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.
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    1. Singularity

      Why does he need to sue them? They just killed a man – if he’s got the evidence to sue them, then there’s evidence that will convict them of murder.

      Why was the lawyer’s aide killed in the first place? You said it was a hit… but why?

      What sets this story apart from every other police corruption film? L.A. Confidential springs to mind instantly.

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    2. Penpusher

      Hi Mike,

      Thank you for the comment. Here is my revised version. I hope this is okay.

      After testifying the lawyer’s aide in a recent fraudulent election in the senate and congressional hearing, a hit is order to torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them and must uncover who elicit it in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

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    3. Samurai

      Can always count on Mike for the good stuff, you’re getting there, consider the following:
      1. Who is He – “he sues”? In the US, allegations/investigations of election fraud/police corruption have many players: high profile attorneys e.g., “Rudy Giuliani”, FBI, Attorney General, Justice Dept aka DOJ – you get the idea. So, what kind of lawyer is your protag?
      2. Concerning “election fraud” are you referring to something local or presidential?
      3. Change “After” to “When” meaning the aid is NOW testifying – that’s the trigger for your baddies to ice him.
      Formula example:
      “In the wake of a fraudulent presidential election, a high profile attorney must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs aka the slaying of his aid on or before testifying]”

      Keep going!

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    4. Penpusher

      Mike, Odie

      Thanks in advance.

      Edit:

      In the aftermath of a fraudulent national election, a fiery attorney must seek reprisal to the death of his aide and confidant when he is torture and kill after testifying.

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