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Marcelo ReisPenpusher
Posted: February 27, 20162016-02-27T06:22:36+10:00 2016-02-27T06:22:36+10:00In: Action

an abandoned child will have the destination changed when you meet your new parents. After a while it grows to a tragic thing happen, his adoptive parents died. And that makes it ue start using drugs in order to contain its super power that is to predict movements, and from that he had become a super hero.

an abandoned child will have the destination changed when you meet your new parents. After a while it grows to a tragic thing happen, his adoptive parents died. And that makes it ue start using drugs in order to contain its super power that is to predict movements, and from that he had become a super hero.
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    1. klee4 Logliner
      2016-04-02T06:37:30+10:00Added an answer on April 2, 2016 at 6:37 am

      How come there hasn’t been any comments on this? I’m, be no means, a professional, but I do know that you should start your sentences with capital letters. Also, I feel like these sentences are very hard to understand. I’m guessing English isn’t your first language. I also feel like there should be less detail. It should be more to the point.

      “After an abandoned child’s adoptive parents die, he starts using drugs to deal with the pain. But the drugs don’t numb him, they give him superpowers.”

      It sounds interesting, though.

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