An ageing married couple teetering on the brink of bankruptcy attempt to stop their farm being repossessed by holding a cynical mortgage field-agent hostage at gunpoint.

What happens next? This, to me, is simply the inciting incident so we need to know what either the married couple do next or what the field-agent does next.

The alternative is that the whole “gunpoint” bit is actually where they end up in act III. If that’s the case then we need to know more about what happens before that.

When a mortgage field-agent threatens to repossess their farm, an ageing married couple must…..

And then tell us what they must do to stop this happening.

Hope this helps.