An artistic high schooler must choose between following her own dreams and attending med school with her teenage crush turned boyfriend while struggling to live up to her mother’s expectations.
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An artistic high schooler must choose between following her own dreams and attending med school with her teenage crush turned boyfriend while struggling to live up to her mother’s expectations.
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Interesting premise, think about the following to strengthen your logline.
What does “follow her dreams” look like? What drives her? E.g., the illuminating crafts of stained glass or becoming a contemporary artist in X.
I dig your crossroads:
– Heartstrings are being tugged by a longtime crush-turned-boyfriend heading to med school.
– Mom wants a DR or another DR as medicine runs in the family.
All parents have expectations for their younglings, think about increasing the conflict by making this mother domineering or that she was “groomed” for med school.
Take care.
Hi Odie, thank you so much for your feedback to improve my logline. Been stuck on it for a while now.
Hope your writing is doing well and strong. Take care !