Logliner
Posted: 2017-05-18T07:04:34+10:00 In:

An aspiring young actor searches for love, which he so desperately wants, from others but not from within himself.

An aspiring young actor searches for love, which he so desperately wants, from others but not from within himself.
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    1. Logliner

      At the moment you don’t have a functioning logline. This story is full of an inner journey but there is no external goal or an event that drives the character towards that goal.

      When an aspiring?young actor takes on a role with a gorgeous actress, he must find a way to get the girl.

      I don’t think what I’ve written is the strongest logline ever but I think it works okay. A lot of the information you have put in your logline doesn’t need to be there. You can definitely have all those elements in your script but I think you should leave them out of your logline.

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