An assassin couple seeks retirement but their victims thirst for revenge, to find peace they have to kill one more time.
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An assassin couple seeks retirement but their victims thirst for revenge, to find peace they have to kill one more time.
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So… if their victims “thirst for revenge”, then the assassin couple don’t seem to be very good at their job.? Because if they were, their victims would be dead, wouldn’t they?
Well, I presume you mean their kin or comrades want revenge.? Whatever, the bigger potential issue I see?is:? why should we want to emphasize or at least be interested in the fate of a couple of assassins –professional ?murderers?? Why should we root for them to survive? ?Maybe the killing couple have ?it coming to them — it’s payback time.
Unless the couple only assassinated people who had it coming to them — oppressive dictators, corrupt businessmen, etc.?– but there’s nothing in the logline to indicate that.
Also, a specific antagonist needs to be identified among the many who “thirst for revenge”.