An awkward, shy and self-conscious woman must learn to dance salsa with her old crush, for her best friend’s wedding

Awkward, shy, and self-conscious … too many adjectives.? I’d at least drop “shy”, because I’d imagine that’s implied by self-conscious.

The fact that she’s dancing with an “old crush” doesn’t seem important, mentioning him in a logline seems even a bit out of place.? I’d remove “with her old crush” unless there’s something else you’d want to add that makes it say more than “here’s where the romance will be”.

I do like the good ol’ practice-dancing movie…? whether it be to get into a great school, to have a glorious performance, or whatever, but dancing at a wedding doesn’t seem to be a very grand moment.? While I agree the bar needs to be set lower for the self-conscious, awkward dancer, there probably needs to be higher stakes, so we know why she’s doing it.

Maybe something like:

An awkward, self-conscious woman must learn to dance salsa for the wedding of her best friend, who was recently diagnosed with a brain tumor.

I would watch THAT movie.