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tony18Penpusher
Posted: August 19, 20222022-08-19T03:51:12+10:00 2022-08-19T03:51:12+10:00In: Drama

A chef discovers that her husband is in an affair with one of her co-workers.

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    1. markferland Penpusher
      2022-08-21T12:14:45+10:00Added an answer on August 21, 2022 at 12:14 pm

      I’m not one with a lot of experience, but I have spent the last four months hammering out hundreds of loglines using multiple logline formats for a screenplay I’m working on, so I’ve picked up on a few things.
      It seem you should make your protagonist a little more exotic to make them more attractive to delve into. What kind of chef, where is she from, what is his expertise, or is he famous? i.e. (a recently married French chef has just opened her first restaurant and)…discovers that her husband is “having’ an affair with one of her co-workers.
      Just an idea. Hope that helps!

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      • IvyEight6 Penpusher
        2022-08-21T12:30:14+10:00Replied to answer on August 21, 2022 at 12:30 pm

        1) She’s a head chef.
        2) She’s from Ethiopia.
        3) He’s good at baking.
        4) He’s not famous.

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    2. almostfilmmaker Penpusher
      2023-10-18T22:08:10+10:00Added an answer on October 18, 2023 at 10:08 pm

      hey, I liked the logline and I wanted to ask if you ever wrote this into a script?

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