A clean up of a logline I posted the other day.
HallucigeniaPenpusher
An ex-cop with PTSD, hired to avenge the murder of a child, is partnered with an artificial intelligence, but soon discovers the intelligence could be lying and must find the truth before another child dies.
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If you don’t mind, what form does the AI take?
Form? Do you mean how is it presented? It’s a voice inside of a car that it controls and is chauffeuring the MC through the job.
Leaning towards:
Hired to avenge the murder of a child, an ex-cop with PTSD is partnered with a [shady/shadowy/unscrupulous] AI [vehicle] to find the truth before another child dies.
It’s almost 2024. Break the mold by abbreviating “artificial intelligence” 😉
Make this yours and have a great New Year – take care.
I like your arrangement a lot. Let’s see…
Hired to avenge the murder of a child, an ex-cop with PTSD is partnered with an unreliable AI to find the killers before another child dies.