An outcast teenager teams up with his high school bully to take down the spirit of Al Capone, who has possessed a small Indiana town to rebuild his empire.
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An outcast teenager teams up with his high school bully to take down the spirit of Al Capone, who has possessed a small Indiana town to rebuild his empire.
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Still, why does he have to team up with the bully? Why is he outcast? He’s possessed the whole town? And what is the inciting incident — it should be first in your logline. Hope this helps.
All comments made to the previous draft of this logline still apply.
As the others have said. ?The math just doesn’t add up in this logline.