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an uber driver struggles to survive after he picked up a judge who followed by a terrorist wanted to kill him.

an uber driver struggles to survive after he picked up a judge who followed by a terrorist wanted to kill him.
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    1. Best Answer
      Uberwriter

      unfortunately, just mentioning your protagonist as an “uber driver” may sound like a good character, it really is only a taxi driver. What else about this guy can we relate to? Does he need to uber to keep from going homeless or something?

      Terrorists seek revenge on a judge and his uber driver as they pursue them… (where, how, something interesting)

      Also, what about this driver makes him somewhat qualified to battle terrorists?

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      >>> struggles to survive

      His goal is only to survive? ?I don’t think that is good enough to sell the concept, make someone want to read the script, make the movie. ?Particularly as the story will inevitably be compared to the movie?“Collateral” (2004).

      IMHO, the implicit promise of the premise needs to be that the an ordinary guy must rise to the occasion and do extraordinary deeds, a timid schmuck must become a brave hero to save the stake characters, the terrorist’s target victims. ?Nothing less will get the script read, the movie made.

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