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dear97sPenpusher
An undercover policewoman lures a member of the Albanian mafia into a sexual relationship, in order to infiltrate and expose his gang’s cocaine trafficking.
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A prudish undercover policewoman must seduce a drug lord with a sadistic sex fetish in order to infiltrate and take down his operation.
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BTW:? his sex fetish could be the Big Reveal, the Dirty Secret she only finds out after successfully seducing him (say around the midpoint).? ?Usually the Big Reveal is not included in a logline.? It is deemed to be a spoiler.? But in this case I believe it’s the story hook — it amps up the tension, the risk she’s taking, the danger she has put herself in.? ?Which is to say, it amps up interest in reading the script to find out what happens next.
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Not a bad logline. The “who” and “goal” are clear. Even though the obstacles are implied, it would be nice to know more about the stakes.
Maybe consider something like:
“An undercover policewoman lures an Albanian mafia member into a sexual relationship in order to expose him, but ends up trying to protect herself and her loved ones when the situation becomes much more complicated than she could have ever imagined.”