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Posted: September 19, 20212021-09-19T08:28:02+10:00 2021-09-19T08:28:02+10:00In: SciFi

Asked to help the New York City police identify a body, a geneticist believes they’ve found a Neanderthal, but when she tries to confirm her results she’s hindered at every step by her university and an influential but secretive agency.

Asked to help the New York City police identify a body, a geneticist believes they’ve found a Neanderthal, but when she tries to confirm her results she’s hindered at every step by her university and an influential but secretive agency.
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    1. beezeebee Penpusher
      2021-09-20T00:12:06+10:00Added an answer on September 20, 2021 at 12:12 am

      Hi byron79,

      Sounds like an interesting science thriller to me, if that is what you actually aimed for. The only thing missing in this logline I think is some indication as to why the geneticist has such a burning desire to fight her employer and take on a secret agency. Is she really this desperate to make a name for herself, or is it somehow personal? That would make the logline even more appealing I think.

      Cheers,
      BeeZeeBee

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        2021-09-20T02:53:44+10:00Replied to answer on September 20, 2021 at 2:53 am

        Thank you.

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