Single mom Roxy walk away with her toddler son Zach after she has an argument with her principled dad, Dr. Skinner. Alina blames Skinner for driving their daughter and grandson away. Distressed Skinner has an office affair that puts his job in jeopardy. He questions being inflexible and uses his influence to avoid suspension. When Skinner is diagnosed with heart disease and requires heart transplant, he hesitantly uses his connections to cheat organ transplant waitlist. When their grandson is found abandoned the concerned Skinner and Alina set out to bring their estranged daughter back. After tracing Roxy’s location, they find out that Roxy died waiting for the same heart that Skinner received. Alina, unable to bear the loss, walks away. Skinner decides to patch up with Alina to raise Zach.
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Before setting out to bring his estranged daughter back, an embattled doctor questions ethical behavior and makes a fateful decision to cheat the organ sharing waitlist.
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I did not read the additional text as the logline should stand alone.
Where does the embattled doctor bring his daughter back from? Whose ethical behaviour is the doctor questioning? Who is the doctor cheating the organ sharing (sic) waitlist for? How is bringing his daughter back linked to cheating the waitlist?
There is no cause and effect in this logline. There should be an event and as a result, action is taken. Questioning ethics is not an event.