Penpusher
Posted: 2016-01-26T10:12:31+10:00 In:

Created by a spirit of life and death, she must find a way to convince him she is worth the life he gave her before he takes it back.

Created by a spirit of life and death, she must find a way to convince him she is worth the life he gave her before he takes it back.
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    1. Singularity

      I hate to point out the obvious, but the logline doesn’t describe a main character.
      Who is the main character?
      What is her flaw?
      What motivates her to achieve her goal?
      What is her goal? Is is to live? If so, how will she know the mysterious “him” won’t kill her after she does what ever she does?

      Loglines are made up of specific details held together by strong and clear cause and effect relationships, so best to avoid generic and vague descriptions as a whole.

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