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CarlKPenpusher
Posted: February 19, 20202020-02-19T02:32:54+10:00 2020-02-19T02:32:54+10:00In: Comedy

Cutting Corners When a veteran and a rookie contract killer happen to kill the wrong guy for a mafia kingpin, ?they race against time to produce a new body before ending up next on the hit-list:? A real killer story.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2020-02-19T03:19:49+10:00Added an answer on February 19, 2020 at 3:19 am

      So two stooges kill the wrong guy — and try to cover it up with another body… that isn’t the person they were supposed to kill?? Why do they think that will solve their problem?? I don’t understand the logic.

      If the “new body” is supposed to be that of the intended target, the logline clearly needs to say so.

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      2020-06-09T07:38:07+10:00Added an answer on June 9, 2020 at 7:38 am

      Yes sounds confusing and the way you place the question mark.

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