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Facing hard time for an unpaid debt, an unorthodox street busker races to find the most spectacular way to bring his piano music to the attention of Europe?s most famous manager before it?s too late ? inspired by a true event.
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>>>facing hard time… before it’s too late.
When is it “too late”?? How much time is left on the ticking clock?? A week, 48 hours, or…?? A ticking clock is always a good feature in a plot and logline.? But a logline can be strengthened by being specific on the deadline the protagonist faces.? (And how much hard time does he face?)
One question I have is about his facing hard time for a debt.? I thought debtor’s prisons in modern economies were a thing of the past.? In what country and in what time period does the story take place?
This clearly won’t be a high concept film, it sounds more in the indie format. But the concept itself seems very unappealing. What about this street busker makes him good enough to think he has what it takes to present his music to a famous music manager? Is the busker an undiscovered savant in music or something? And what exactly do you mean by before it’s too late? Is the famous music manager planning on going back to Europe soon or is the street busker on the verge of death? Structuring your Logline to answer those questions will make the concept of your movie much more appealing in my opinion.