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sabrownPenpusher
Posted: January 13, 20212021-01-13T01:46:32+10:00 2021-01-13T01:46:32+10:00In: Drama

Four friends must stop a blackmailer with evidence of a death they covered up.

Four friends must stop a blackmailer with evidence of a death they covered up.
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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2021-01-13T19:39:21+10:00Added an answer on January 13, 2021 at 7:39 pm

      Did they commit murder? If not, why not?? Up the stakes!

      Can you focus on one of the four as the leader? Even in most ensemble films, there is one character who (not always but often) acts as the protagonist – Danny Ocean in Ocean’s 11, Gordy in Stand By Me, Mikey in The Goonies for example. It’s handy for the audience to have one pair of eyes through which to feel the journey with – an emotional conduit.

      I feel like this would head into Thriller/Horror territory. “I Know What You Did Last Summer”, “Blackmail”, “The Machinist” are just a few that spring to mind.

      What’s the inciting incident? What started them on this road?

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