Penpusher
Posted: 2022-05-13T10:37:02+10:00 In:

In an effort to win souls, a street preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation.

In an effort to win souls, a street preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation.
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    1. Logliner

      Hi Assaf,
      is this closer to what you are aiming for?

      In an effort to increase his disciples, an evangelist preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation.

      Now, how else can you say this? “walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation”

      re-write and we will see it then.

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