When she spots a wormhole that’ll pass between the Earth and the Moon within a week, a scavenger, with an enthusiasm for NASA’s golden years, must use what she’s collected to find the mythical last rocket ever built to escape our ravaged world and launch a new beginning for mankind.
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When she discovers a clue to NASA’s plan to escape Earth for a new world years before disaster and war ravaged the planet, a scavenger must use what she’s collected to find the mythical “last rocket” to escape our world and launch a new beginning for mankind.
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It probably is a bit wordy, but the story is essentially a love letter to an era of fascination and exploration that perhaps we’ve lost.
I see two tales, which is the main one. I use one story to tell a second. But that is in the script not a logline. I am left with a few questions.
Fly to where to escape what. If I knew this I’d know the story.
Perhaps the wormhole is a major thing, but feel like unnecessary detail in this version.
Can you expand a bit?
I’m seeing a post-apocalyptic Earth, and a hunt for glory/renewal. ?How’s this as a rephrasing/trimming:
An impending?wormhole entices?a nostalgic scavenger to ?find the mythical “last rocket ever built” so she can? launch a new beginning for mankind.
Aha. so how about this:
In a post-apocalyptic future, an impending wormhole entices a nostalgic scavenger to find the mythical rocket created?to exorcise it so she can ?launch a new beginning for mankind.