The A1
Olivia, 25, a pothead, decides to hitchike from her home in Sydney to Cairns via the A1 coastal highway to see her estranged mother after her father fires her from his restaurant hoping she'll do something more with her life and quit cannabis.
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Specific highway, maybe too much info. HI GABBY!
what stakes are there in the story?
Olivia a 25 year old pothead from Sydney decides to hitchhike to Cairns to see her estranged mother after her father fires her from his restaurant, by doing this she hopes to quit her bad habits and create a better life for herself.
I specified the highway because the story will be about her trip, which will be taking place all the way up north on the coast going through nsw and queensland which is where (basically) all of australians live. I specified it it because THAT is a beautiful trip to take rather than taking the faster route inland.
the dangers of hitchiking by herself? Is that not enough
i specified the freeway because of where it is, and that her father fires her means that in doing it for her father she’s actually doing it for herself, her flaw being she doesn’t admit she’s not doing enough. cheers for the intro though you’re right
a1 high way reeks
Maybe make it crystal meth instead of the ol’ devil’s lettuce because everyone and their dog smokes in Australia. Awesome idea and roadtrip films are always an excellent setting for people finding themselves and what not, but if you center it on marijuana, people will shrink away and think it’s preachy. Or not.
After loosing her job, an unmotivated stoner hitch hikes across country to make peace with her estranged mother…”
Simplify your concept down to it’s core..
What is the urgency ??
What is she risking ??
Why is she seeing her mother ??
Why does she have to quit drugs ??
Define character weakness and not be repetitive..
Happy writing 😀
Tor