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Posted: April 7, 20132013-04-07T21:21:43+10:00 2013-04-07T21:21:43+10:00In: Student Loglines

On his 18th birthday, a young, man is going to paint a train, like he?s done countless times before, but this time he meets with two rival gangs, that engage in a deadly battle, which attracts the attention of the local police, and being 18, risks incarceration if he is caught.

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    1. Tor Dollhouse
      2013-04-07T21:43:23+10:00Added an answer on April 7, 2013 at 9:43 pm

      “While graffitiing a train, a careless teenager is caught between two street gangs in a rivalry that attracts the attention of the local police on his 18th birthday.”

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2013-04-17T03:47:25+10:00Added an answer on April 17, 2013 at 3:47 am

      Leaner, but why is he at risk? Is he in danger of doing hard time because he a suspect (even though he was a bystander), an accessory to the crime, a perp? What’s his objective goal other than to evade arrest? Isn’t it to prove he’s innocent, have the real villain(s) brought to justice?

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