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One of the last hair metal bands in America must battle changing musical trends and a shadowy corporate adversary on their quest to reach L.A. and rock n roll stardom.

One of the last hair metal bands in America must battle changing musical trends and a shadowy corporate adversary on their quest to reach L.A. and rock n roll stardom.
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    2 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      This is too vague.
      You need to describe specifically what the inciting incident is;
      What does “…must battle changing musical trends…” mean? What is the specific event in which they do that?

      You also need to describe specifically what the goal is:
      What does “…rock and roll stardom….” mean in practical terms? What single objective do they need to achieve?

      Lastly, why? What is at stake if they fail?

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    2. Samurai

      THE HARDER THEY FALL –
      After the Seattle grunge scene takes over and a lauded hair metal band loses relevancy overnight, the cocaine fueled-narcissistic lead singer engages in a publicity stunt that lands him in jail where he turns his life around with the help of a mysterious reformed murderer.

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