Logliner
Posted: 2016-09-03T00:16:53+10:00 In:

Orphaned by the War, a linguistic prodigy finds meaning as a Nazi Spy, when she falls for an Allied officer targeted by her team, she must risk it all to save the officer and her humanity.

Orphaned by the War, a linguistic prodigy finds meaning as a Nazi Spy, when she falls for an Allied officer targeted by her team, she must risk it all to save the officer and her humanity.
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    1. Logliner

      Hopefully, this version is closer. Although, I am not ?super happy with the “must risk it all” part. ?I stuck with it for brevities sake and because?i am unsure how much of the plot I should reveal. ?Let me know your thoughts and suggestions. Thank you!

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    2. This one is very vague. Risk it all could mean any number of things, orphaned by the war is unnecessary as clearly in this version the falling in love is the inciting incident. Also, why would an ally be targeted by her team? I still don’t see the link between her and the soldier either. And on top of that her humanity? Very very vague — will she go against the Nazis? There’s no sympathy here, no flaw except “orphan” that would make me think that she could be a relatable character capable of standing up to the Nazi empire because… Love?

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    3. Singularity

      I have the same question as before. ?Why spy on the officer? ?If he’s that much of a threat, why not just assassinate him?

      Is this “inspired by real events” or “based upon a true story” or is it a complete fiction? ?And as noted by Moses99 it’s vague, lacks details to establish how it’s different from the 1,001 other war movies. ?Like, her nationality. ? Is she French, Dutch, Danish, Russian, Ukranian? ?And the setting, ?on western front or the eastern?

      And why should an audience be interested and sympathize with a character who chooses to work for the Nazis?

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