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RE-EDIT Escapees from a prison planet carrying proof of atrocities committed by the Corporation crash into an outpost over Jupiter. Pursued by the head of security of the prison they have half an hour to reach the communication room and alert Earth before the outpost plummets into the atmosphere.

RE-EDIT Escapees from a prison planet carrying proof of atrocities committed by the Corporation crash into an outpost over Jupiter. Pursued by the head of security of the prison they have half an hour to reach the communication room and alert Earth before the outpost plummets into the atmosphere.
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    1. Uberwriter

      “Pursued by prison security, the teenage escapee must lead other prisoners to the communication room with vital corporate secret, before the outpost crashes into earth”

      25 words and single protagonist with clear goal

      However, I’m still unclear about the plot
      outpost……prison planet…..atrocities(maybe being prisoner they deserve it??)….

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