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Posted: October 5, 20192019-10-05T17:29:06+10:00 2019-10-05T17:29:06+10:00In: Thriller

(revised) When her mother is brutally murdered, a family woman must find out who her mother was, in order to uncover what happened; but when a cult from her mother?s secret past starts to infiltrate her life , she must save her family and herself from the cults? grip or risk becoming victims themselves.

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    1. Scott Danzig Samurai
      2019-10-06T00:58:20+10:00Added an answer on October 6, 2019 at 12:58 am

      Seems better… but I’m wondering if this can be simplified to just jump to the cult.

      After learning of a secret cult’s responsibility for her mother’s brutal murder, a woman must now save herself and her family from being their next victims.

      I think that gets to the interesting part more directly and still remains true to the story, no?? I don’t think it’s important to make explicit how the cult operates.? I do like the mother “investigating the mother’s secret past”, but I don’t think that’s part of the hook for this movie.

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