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Posted: 2019-10-18T17:06:28+10:00 In:

(REVISION #8) When a na?ve, rambunctious teenager muscles in on her sister?s singing career in 1963?s England, her dream of stardom fizzles out as she succumbs to the excesses of a Rock?n Roll lifestyle, ends up pregnant, and after a botched illegal abortion, has to re-evaluate her life to halt her downward spiral.

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    1. Singularity

      This is a wordier version of the same logline posted several drafts ago. Seeing as much of the same story problems still exist, I recommend you study the comments you got to date and reevaluate this concept on a fundamental level.

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