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dear97sPenpusher
Posted: September 6, 20182018-09-06T01:16:00+10:00 2018-09-06T01:16:00+10:00In: Drama

Set in 1950’s New York, a middle aged Greek immigrant has to dress like a man, in order to become a bouzouki player and raise money to get back her children from her abusive husband.

Set in 1950’s New York, a middle aged Greek immigrant has to dress like a man, in order to become a bouzouki player and raise money to get back her children from her abusive husband.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2018-09-06T05:53:12+10:00Added an answer on September 6, 2018 at 5:53 am

      Maybe it will be obvious to Greeks, but the producers of the movie will no doubt want to appeal to a wider, general audience.? So, as a non-Greek potential movie viewer, why MUST she dress like a man to play the bouzouki?

      And how will the money enable her to get back her children?? Is that what he demands — he is, in effect, holding his own kids for ransom?? (And where is he holding them?? In Greece?)

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-09-06T17:54:00+10:00Added an answer on September 6, 2018 at 5:54 pm
      Agreed with DPG.

      Also, why is she separated from the kids? Was there a divorce? Did the husband kick her out of the house? What is the inciting event that sets this story in motion?

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2018-09-07T07:25:45+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2018 at 7:25 am

      dear97s:

      Thanks for the clarification.? Putting aside for now the cultural context that compels her to go “undercover”, what good will raising all that money do if the husband refuses to let his children join her in America?? After all, per your statement, it’s a very macho culture,? a very patriarchal culture.? What “macho” man would surrender custody of his children at any price?

      Has he agreed to let her “buy” their freedom to join her in America?? Or does plan to “get her children” back by hiring someone to kidnap them?

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    4. Anette Logliner
      2018-09-11T04:53:57+10:00Added an answer on September 11, 2018 at 4:53 am

      I think it sounds like a real dramatic movie! But yes, it needs a bit more info on the crossdressing reasons.

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