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Posted: 2017-10-14T09:26:11+10:00 In:

She ran away from the sharecropping life she was born into, and pursued her dream of becoming a Blues musician. This is the story of Blues Legend: Memphis Minnie.

She ran away from the sharecropping life she was born into, and pursued her dream of becoming a Blues musician. This is the story of Blues Legend: Memphis Minnie.
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    1. Singularity

      Maybe something like:

      The story of Memphis Minnie who at the age of ten ran away from a sharecropping life to pursue her dream of becoming a Blues musician.
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      Notes:

      *I suggest it would be more effective and accurate to? categorize it as a biography than a drama.

      *Biographies and histories are the exception to the rule of not cluttering up loglines with character names.? For one thing, in the age of the Internet, one can quickly google the name to verify and find? additional information.

      *Which is what I did and found what for me is the story hook.? There are innumerable biographies of people who struggle to overcome poverty and overwhelming obstacles to realize their Big Dream.? But the story of a girl who runs away?at the age of 10?to pursue her Big Dream — that’s uncommon.? That’s a differentiating element — a hook –? that needs to be in the logline.

      Fwiw. Best wishes with this story.

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    2. Singularity

      Is there something specific that made her need to run away?
      If nothing specific, is there anything you know about her life that you could embellish into the event??

      Lastly, can you define “…becoming a blues musician…”? In other words, it could help if the logline had a specific goal that will embody her as a blues musician. What was her break out gig that put her on the world stage?

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