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Posted: April 7, 20182018-04-07T06:30:13+10:00 2018-04-07T06:30:13+10:00In: Action

Spoon on the Wall

An undercover policewoman lures a member of the Albanian mafia into a sexual relationship, in order to infiltrate and expose his gang’s cocaine trafficking.

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    1. henb Samurai
      2019-06-02T21:58:37+10:00Added an answer on June 2, 2019 at 9:58 pm

      I feel the ‘undercover policewoman’ needs a descriptor for her personality, or for her past. ‘Lures… into a sexual relationship’ sounds a little menacing, perhaps you could make this sound more procedural, while solidifying that this must be done to bring down the drug dealers.

      I would introduce the ending to your logline first, then introduce the policewoman, then explain her objective.

      Here’s an example: Infiltration of a cocaine trafficking ring relies solely on the undercover mission of an inexperienced policewoman, involving a false love interest in a violent and ambitious member of the Albanian mafia.

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