Logliner
Posted: 2018-10-28T03:16:24+10:00 In:

Strange people in a foreign land with no constitutional rights, these Irish gypsies learn the hard way that the criminal can become the crime victim!

Strange people in a foreign land with no constitutional rights, these Irish gypsies learn the hard way that the criminal can become the crime victim!
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    1. Logliner

      Who is the antagonist and what is his motive?

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    2. Singularity

      >>>learn the hard way

      Loglines are not about lessons learned.? Loglines are about the action a protagonist takes to achieve a specific objective goal.
      Who is the protagonist?
      What is his or her objective goal?

      (If you have not already done so, please review the? guidelines under “Our formula” at the top of the page for constructing an industry standard logline.)

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    3. Singularity

      As the others have mentioned, the story isn’t clear.

      Who specifically does what and why?

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