Logliner
Posted: 2017-05-11T00:51:10+10:00 In:

Video recordings showing murders and political payoff sent to key intelligence agencies lure a retired operative back, quickly he discover corruption, assassinations tied to a government program so he has to find the one who started it as his associates begin dropping, he has to find this man before they kill him or succeed at destroying the foundation of the country.

Video recordings showing murders and political payoff sent to key intelligence agencies lure a retired operative back, quickly he discover corruption, assassinations tied to a government program so he has to find the one who started it as his associates begin dropping, he has to find this man before they kill him or succeed at destroying the foundation of the country.
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    2 Reviews

    1. Uberwriter

      First off, the FBI investigates murders domestically and the CIA works larger issues that are abroad. It has to do with their power structure. Disillusioned CIA agent reminds me of Homeland. That can be good or bad.

      All of your elements are very generic and do little to portray anything unique. Get into what the cost is and what specific and unique force (good luck with that in this genre) happens to offer this story.

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    2. Singularity

      As Foxtrot25 said.

      The ?logline for the genre needs to be specific — not vague — about the danger he faces. IOW: it needs to name a specific antagonist or state the specific overarching obstacle that threatens to frustrate and defeat him.

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