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henbSamurai
Posted: April 28, 20192019-04-28T23:14:44+10:00 2019-04-28T23:14:44+10:00In: SciFi

Test-tube humans created by a Utopian civilization are unwittingly TV show contestants. One Uto woman tries to decimate members of a vile society, while showrunners manipulate a female Tuber to turn to terrorism.

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    1. Ckharper Samurai
      2019-04-29T17:03:26+10:00Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 5:03 pm

      So who is the protagonist?
      Is this like hunger games where the ?Uto woman? is trying to take down this tv show thing? She?s fighting against one of these test-tube humans?

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2019-04-30T08:16:16+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2019 at 8:16 am

      This is confusing.

      Who is the main character? What does he or she want? And why?

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    3. RRehavi Penpusher
      2019-04-30T15:18:51+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2019 at 3:18 pm

      This is sort of everywhere at all at once, consider streamlining the story?

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    4. henb Samurai
      2019-11-03T23:19:46+10:00Added an answer on November 3, 2019 at 11:19 pm

      LOGLINE UPDATE #1:

      A defiant teenager discovers she was created by a Utopian civilization and is being monitored and manipulated for entertainment, while a disillusioned woman tries ending a TV series chronicling a purely evil society.

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