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dpgSingularity
Posted: January 25, 20202020-01-25T00:42:08+10:00 2020-01-25T00:42:08+10:00In: Crime, Examples

The wife and mistress of a loathed man conspire to execute a perfect plan that makes it appear he accidentally drowned in a swimming pool — and then the body disappears.

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Les Diabolique
(1955)

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    1. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2020-01-28T13:42:14+10:00Added an answer on January 28, 2020 at 1:42 pm

      After the wife and mistress of a loathed man make it appear he accidentally drowned in a swimming pool his body disappears. (I don’t know what happens next).

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    2. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2020-01-29T18:29:49+10:00Added an answer on January 29, 2020 at 6:29 pm

      I wonder if it should be clearer they actually carry out this plan. ?Currently they’re only conspiring to execute.

      I love the “and then the body disappears” though. Perfect MPR.

      I love this film! It’s almost comedic sometimes in the absurdity. I recommend it to everyone I can.

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    3. Zordyceps Logliner
      2020-02-15T06:01:43+10:00Added an answer on February 15, 2020 at 6:01 am

      I think the word MURDER should be front and center here. The murder, whether they were successful or not, seems to be the very heart of this conflict, no?

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    4. dpg Singularity
      2020-02-15T06:43:04+10:00Added an answer on February 15, 2020 at 6:43 am

      Zordyceps:

      You raise a good point.? I would have worded the logline differently if the murder were the heart, the story hook of the French film.

      But the murder isn’t really the main conflict.? In the film, the main conflict that dominates the 2nd half of the film is what the two women do AFTER the body disappears (and the disappearance is the story hook). How the mistress, in particular, tries to figure out what happened without betraying what they did.

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