Penpusher
Posted: 2015-12-09T06:14:40+10:00 In:

Things get dicey when a hitman finds himself sitting with the man who hired him and his proposed victim at a small town diner.

Things get dicey when a hitman finds himself sitting with the man who hired him and his proposed victim at a small town diner.
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    1. Singularity

      This logline sets up a situation. ?But the situation is only the 1st element of a plot. ?And a logline ?should be a succinct description of an entire plot, not just a situation.

      So what happens next? ?What specifically becomes the plot as a result of this set up? ?What are the stakes — for the the hit man?

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    2. Uberwriter

      What does the main character want and what is stopping him.?

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