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StasiaPenpusher
Posted: June 10, 20242024-06-10T15:31:05+10:00 2024-06-10T15:31:05+10:00In: Superhero

Three good for nothing youths unexpectedly gain superpowers and must save their crumbling city, YGN, from complete destruction.

A young man in his early 20s is plagued by constant nightmares that reveal an unexpected and terrifying truth about the future. He learns that in 12 years, his country will be destroyed, and the woman he secretly loves will become his wife—only to die in the impending catastrophe. Armed with this knowledge, he and a team of friends who have newly gained superpowers must work together to change the course of destiny and save their nation from destruction.

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    1. quantumpoet Penpusher
      2024-09-03T03:06:06+10:00Added an answer on September 3, 2024 at 3:06 am

      The logline is pretty clear but comes across quite generic. Once I read the synopsis I was intrigued, because now I understood what was personally at stake and his knowledge of the future. I think you should distill it into a more specific logline. E.g. focusing on the fact that he can see the future and has to change the present to stop a catastrophe that will kill his future wife and destroy the nation.

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