EDITED: Three outlaw sisters hunt for the illegitimate brother set to inherit their dying father’s burgled millions whilst being pursued by a vengeful detective
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EDITED: Three outlaw sisters hunt for the illegitimate brother set to inherit their dying father’s burgled millions whilst being pursued by a vengeful detective
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Why do they need to find him? ?The inheritance consists of stolen money; the sisters are outlaws — why would they bother with the niceties of the law? ? Aren’t they crooked enough to abscond with the inheritance themselves?
And why should the audience want to root for outlaws to get the inheritance since it’s ill-gotten gain?
Maybe if this were a comedy about the absurd actions of flawed characters. ?But as a drama? ?I dunno.