Being held responsible for the death of the tiger she took care of, a scared single mother has one chance to save her job as a zookeeper: to tame an untamable tiger.
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The inciting incident in this logline is not clearly stated. Better write something like this: After the death of the tiger she was taking care of, a scared single mother has to tame an untamable tiger to save her job as a zookeeper.
But to be honest, I don’t see this objective goal as enough for a whole story. What does taming exactly mean?
And why is she dependent on the job? Does she have debt or is it her favorite job?