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henbSamurai
Posted: November 6, 20192019-11-06T21:42:04+10:00 2019-11-06T21:42:04+10:00In: Historical

To create a superior race, an Albino rapes members of his own Black community, then his offspring use White magic to drastically increase their numbers and later summon demons to turn the tides of war.

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    1. henb Samurai
      2019-11-06T21:49:40+10:00Added an answer on November 6, 2019 at 9:49 pm

      LOGLINE UPDATE #1:

      The strongest and smartest Black citizens must help end the war between them and an army that follows the legacy of their Albino master, who believed in the creation and supremacy of a White race.

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    2. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2019-11-06T22:09:15+10:00Added an answer on November 6, 2019 at 10:09 pm

      Whilst it may be set in the past, I think historical films would be ones which focused on events from mankind’s history. This would fall under fantasy to me.

      What is the event that kicks this story off? Who is the protagonist? What is their goal?

      These three questions are really important to understanding the story. Without these, you simply have a premise. I think the world in which your story is set is an interesting one. Now give us an individual’s story through this war.

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