Logliner
Posted: 2018-02-06T16:59:43+10:00 In:

To find his cancer treatment, a broke man goes after a serial killer who has a large bounty placed on his head .

To find his cancer treatment, a broke man goes after a serial killer who has a large bounty placed on his head .
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    1. Uberwriter

      This has a critical error as written. He will not FIND his cancer treatment if he catches the killer, he will FUND his potential treatment after bringing him to justice.

      Otherwise, interesting premise. I’d find a way to introduce the ticking clock into this to make the urgency drive the story somehow.

      Perhaps he needs to also out race a posse?

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    2. Logliner

      That was a spelling mistake. I didn?t know how to edit an already posted log line. My bad.

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