To save a retirement home from bankruptcy, its uptight director must convince her estranged, obnoxious father to make a significant donation, or face losing her job and custody of her daughter. But when he insists on playing a role in running the home, the director must balance the need to keep her father’s money with the increasing annoyance of the home’s residents with the coarse intruder.
Michael FineLogliner
To save a retirement home from bankruptcy, its uptight director must convince her estranged, obnoxious father to make a significant donation, or face losing her job and custody of her daughter. But when he insists on playing a role in running the home, the director must balance the need to keep her father’s money with the increasing annoyance of the home’s residents with the coarse intruder.
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Leaning towards:
“An uptight director’s cash-strapped retirement home is turned topsy-turvy when accepting a bailout from her estranged father and his ensuing meddling sparks an old-folks revolt”
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Hi Michael, your concept is great but as Odie suggested, you probably want to make it shorter to read ! Good luck on your project. Sounds like a fun movie to watch !
Hey,
I think Odie’s response is an improvement. However I think it’s missing an action. At the moment there isn’t a solution to the problem in either logline which means the movie could go on forever. How does the uptight director solve her issues? When you work that out I would make sure to include it in the logline.
It’s a tv show. One-camera comedy. The problem is supposed to go on forever. It’s the engine of the show.