Two Jedi knights sent to break a planetary blockade are instead caught up in an return of an ancient old enemy known as the Sith, and the destined discovery of a child born from a Jedi prophesy.

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Two Jedi knights sent to break a planetary blockade are instead caught up in an return of an ancient old enemy known as the Sith, and the destined discovery of a child born from a Jedi prophesy.

I don’t know the movie well enough to improve the logline but it sounds more like the description of the opening situation (or end of Act One) than summary of what needs to be achieved.

Ad do we really have two protagonists?

Can you give us a little more about the nature of the enemy? I’m not sure if you need to mention the name Sith as it doesn’t really contribute to the story.

What does ‘destined discovery’ mean?