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dpgSingularity
Posted: April 4, 20202020-04-04T00:14:46+10:00 2020-04-04T00:14:46+10:00In: Comedy, Examples

A neurotic actor, struggling to perform in a Chekhov play, has his soul temporarily extracted and rents a Russian one. Success– rave reviews! Now he must find and reclaim his soul which has been stolen and implanted in someone else.

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Cold Souls

(2009)

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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2020-04-05T12:14:10+10:00Added an answer on April 5, 2020 at 12:14 pm

      Checked it out on IMDB – looks interesting.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2020-04-07T00:58:01+10:00Added an answer on April 7, 2020 at 12:58 am

      As I indicated, this is not an easy film to logline. I originally thought only to post a logline with the story hook.? Just the 1st sentence that lays down the set up:

      A neurotic actor, struggling to perform in a Chekhov play, has his soul temporarily extracted and rents a Russian one.

      The 2nd sentence refers to the MPR moment.

      Actually, the first sentence doesn’t really convey how the plot unfolds.? Here’s the sequence of plot beats:

      1]INITIAL SITUATION: the actor is floundering in rehearsals to play Uncle Vanya.
      2]INCITING INCIDENT: At tip from his agent about a New Yorker article on soul extraction directs him to a consultation.
      3] DEBATE AND INDECISION: After learning more and overcoming his doubts and concerns…
      4]END OF ACT ONE: He crosses the threshold, has his ineffectual soul extracted and stored.

      5]BUT (complication):? Not having a soul to put into the role only makes his performance worse.
      6] In desperation, he rents the soul of a female Russian poet.
      7] Now he’s able to give a soulful performance. Success!
      8]BUT (complication): he develops an allergic reaction: the Russian poet’s soul is too great to dwell in a mediocre person such as the actor.? So he must return it and regain his own soul.
      9]MPR:? He goes to retrieve his soul from storage, discovers it’s gone.

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