I changed it a bit thanks to the good advice I was given.
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When a good-for-nothing architect after a divorce is rejected by his 6 year-old son, he signs up for a competition to create the towns new playground and win back his sons respect.
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Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. “When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the towns new playground in order to win back the respect of his son.
Thank you! And of course – the father first! 🙂
that’s cool – a great drama in intimate scale, this concept defines “success” very originally and challenges our, as an audience, expectation that it must be money/career/prestige; I read here a promise of a wise, intelligent and entertaining movie with ironic twists. I’m in 😉
Thank you very much!
Love it, and love the previous feedback, just have to be “like that” and say that here loser would be with one o, otherwise it takes on a different meaning 🙂
Ha ha! Thank you Sonja!