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AlexpsmithPenpusher
Posted: June 16, 20152015-06-16T10:33:11+10:00 2015-06-16T10:33:11+10:00In: Examples

When a cohesive power ends and is replaced by rampant drug dealing, a resolute crack team must bring a savage war in the streets to a end.

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    1. 2015-06-20T13:31:59+10:00Added an answer on June 20, 2015 at 1:31 pm

      “cohesive power” is vague. Who has this power, tell us about them. How and why is it replaced by rampant drug dealing. Is the savage street war connected to these other things. The story is about Unit7 bring a street war to an end. The rest can be dropped. Leave it for the synopsis.

      Now who in Unit 7 is interesting? Who would be interested in?

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