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When a dog of a dangerous breed is abandoned in front of Sofia, she decides to take her in, despite the colony of cats she has at home.
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Consider the following:
1. Be specific with the breed to orientate the reader.
2. Who is Sofia? At the least “A young woman…”
3. The title is puzzling as adoption is a choice. She can just take the abandoned dog to the pound – end of story. Is there a long-term situation?
Example:
“A cat lady must [Action/GOAL] when [Major Event] e.g., stuck with an abandoned pit bull during a pandemic lockdown”
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Hello Odie, thanks the coment!
How about:
Sofia, a young sportswoman and cat lover, watches a Bull Terrier dog being thrown out of a car.
Worried rescues the animal, despite the cat colony she has at home.
3. The title is puzzling as adoption is a choice. She can just take the abandoned dog to the pound – end of story. Is there a long-term situation?
throughout the narrative, she tries to take the animal to the kennel.
the character’s dilemma in the story is to hold the dog in a house full of cats, while
look for a new home for the abandoned animal